davidpuralocura's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Amil and Company]

pretty good
but the third one does not feel like shes falling
feels a big out of context
apart from that well done

Amilcarasd2 responds:

it's true, I didn't get to give a concrete effect to the illustration, it was a passing idea that I tried to assemble as I could in the process, thanks for the opinion, it's very help to me. 😁

[Ramensoupe]

i really like this painting
but on the middle a bit to the right there is a black line that seems out of context
other than that if feels nice to watch

kuehlung responds:

Yeah it is kind of disturbing now that you say it. But iam glad you like it :)

[Stickman]

not bad but there need to be more flow in it
the jumping and running don't feel connected at all
seems like two kind of animations together
and maybe a bit longer

Stickfigure456 responds:

Thank u for the critique, I'll take note next time

[Hallownest zine]

really professional painting
so well detailed and the contrast of colors looks so good
well done love it

cecil1107 responds:

Thank you so much! OwO

[JAPON]

nihongo
una decente bandera de japon

komanix responds:

lo mejorare pero tranquilo entiendo tu comentario

[Pink]

looks professional
but kinda empty with the white background
maybe zoom a bit more next time

Jinevo responds:

Yes thank you, I will think about that

[Fail]

looks good
some of the green is kinda different colored
reminds me of the millennium falcon

FreezeFry responds:

thank you, i started with it a few years ago and forgot what green i used and wont bother with it.
but you are absolutely right it looks like the millennium falcon.
originally it should be rotated to the left by 90%

[Inktober #31 Umpking]

lol i did a pumpking too today
i think its one of the first things that comes to mind
if you think of halloween
very nicely done

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah it's probably not the first time I've done one for this day either. :) Even dressed up as a pumpkin back in school, come to think of it...

Thanks!

[[Octobit] 13]

this looks pretty good
well done
maybe some of the black could have had more color
or mix more of the blue on it
just an idea as on the blue there is alot but on the black its empthy
still looks good

CandySweetssJr responds:

I don't usually get feedback, so I appreciate it :)!

I did want the scene to be to confusing by adding a ton of color, so I added a bit a black. I agree with you though. Adding more blue to the black would make it better.

[Conan The Barbarian]

not bad
but the chest looks too square i would say

EpithetSoup responds:

That's fair enough! Thanks for the feedback!